Is it a good title and subtitle …

Hi guys,

This is for a weight loss product for women, I would like your opinions or suggestions on what you think of this title and subtitles:

I felt old, fat and depressed
SEMrush

"Afraid my husband leaves me for a
Skinner, more attractive woman … "

Read this special report to find out how worried I was about my marriage and marriage … to get a slim, slim body that my husband loves!

Thanks in advance!